My summer holiday
From the beginning. here are some thoughts I'd like to support, or compare with other people's opinions.
During the time I was at the school camp, in june, i've noticed and faced in the real, some of the most popular teens problems such as : leck of an attention, addiction to the mobile phones, or computers, impoliteness, or, even egoism..
To start with, egoistical mood in my opinion is very irritant and , even annoying side of the human behaviour and manners, for example : when you introduce yourself, try to greet him with a simple handshake, or say him hello, and he, instead an answer, or other gesture, returns you the only silence.. There appears a feeling as you are just the rudest boy on a planet, that's an uncomfortable feeling.
On the other hand, some people consider egoistical behaviour to be a cool and useful thing to make them become popular inside their friends campaign.
To conclude, there are many different points of view on this point, to my mind it is rude and impolite, If they could changed themselves, it would be great.
During the time I was at the school camp, in june, i've noticed and faced in the real, some of the most popular teens problems such as : leck of an attention, addiction to the mobile phones, or computers, impoliteness, or, even egoism..
To start with, egoistical mood in my opinion is very irritant and , even annoying side of the human behaviour and manners, for example : when you introduce yourself, try to greet him with a simple handshake, or say him hello, and he, instead an answer, or other gesture, returns you the only silence.. There appears a feeling as you are just the rudest boy on a planet, that's an uncomfortable feeling.
On the other hand, some people consider egoistical behaviour to be a cool and useful thing to make them become popular inside their friends campaign.
To conclude, there are many different points of view on this point, to my mind it is rude and impolite, If they could changed themselves, it would be great.
Please, check everything again and correct grammar mistakes. They make the story difficult to understand.More over the task was to write an essay ("expressing the own opinion") - Summer Holidays
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